Presentation evaluation

www-Had good text on what the whole concept of the music video was and what was happening.
www-Understood what the music video message was.
www-Knew what was happening clearly and had the whole idea on what hey were all doing.

EBI-Had a clearer description and better and neater writing.
EBI-evaluated the work more neatly and nicer to show in a presentation
EBI-Laid the work out in a neater and a better designed view.